Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
Sweat slid down my temples while the warm luminous sun kissed the back of my neck. I remember the blue paint that spilled over my feet and the distant laughter that followed. After three short days, I built a house and a friendship that I will never forget.
Participating in service has always been an interest of mine, so I was ecstatic about the Habitat for Humanity trip in Vietnam. Our task was simple. We had to build a house for a family, aiming to get as much of it done in just three days. I knew I wanted to create a strong bond with the family, but I never knew that I would develop a bond so strong that it would leave me in tears as I left the building site. Out of all the family members, I connected with their daughter the most. Our way of communication was mostly through endless smiles and laughter, but I believe that was what really brought us together. From splashing cold water at each other to painting doors for hours, the language barrier didn’t stop us from having fun while building something that would last for years.
This idea of wanting to help others has always been a trait of mine. The satisfaction of knowing I've done a good deed leaves me at peace. That being said, I have transferred to five different schools, meeting new people of different cultures and ethnicities. So I guess it is safe to say that I have grown as an internationally minded citizen. I understand how people communicate with each other. I understand that we have our strengths and weaknesses. Unconsciously, I began to take this idea to another level by joining an outdoor leadership class and accepting the role as co-captain of the basketball team. Not only did I want to be helpful, I also wanted to take the initiative to lead people in the right direction.
Given the tragic news that is constantly occurring all over the world, it only makes me want to do more. Ever watched those graphic videos of Syrian homes diminishing? This current event is one of many others that are not receiving as much attention as they should. Through this, I believe that communication is the first step into influencing others for the better. I want to help. I need to help. Although I may still be unsure of my future profession, I know for sure that I want to be a positive influence in someone's life.
While the blue paint remains a stain on my flip flops, I look back on those three days that taught me to be grateful. It taught me to find the good in the bad. It taught me to share peace with those around me. After all, blue is also the color of serenity.
Reflection: I fixed a few typos and grammatical errors. My peer suggested I add more things in the fourth paragraph but I'm not sure if I'm happy with it.
Sweat slid down my temples while the warm luminous sun kissed the back of my neck. I remember the blue paint that spilled over my feet and the distant laughter that followed. After three short days, I built a house and a friendship that I will never forget.
Participating in service has always been an interest of mine, so I was ecstatic about the Habitat for Humanity trip in Vietnam. Our task was simple. We had to build a house for a family, aiming to get as much of it done in just three days. I knew I wanted to create a strong bond with the family, but I never knew that I would develop a bond so strong that it would leave me in tears as I left the building site. Out of all the family members, I connected with their daughter the most. Our way of communication was mostly through endless smiles and laughter, but I believe that was what really brought us together. From splashing cold water at each other to painting doors for hours, the language barrier didn’t stop us from having fun while building something that would last for years.
This idea of wanting to help others has always been a trait of mine. The satisfaction of knowing I've done a good deed leaves me at peace. That being said, I have transferred to five different schools, meeting new people of different cultures and ethnicities. So I guess it is safe to say that I have grown as an internationally minded citizen. I understand how people communicate with each other. I understand that we have our strengths and weaknesses. Unconsciously, I began to take this idea to another level by joining an outdoor leadership class and accepting the role as co-captain of the basketball team. Not only did I want to be helpful, I also wanted to take the initiative to lead people in the right direction.
Given the tragic news that is constantly occurring all over the world, it only makes me want to do more. Ever watched those graphic videos of Syrian homes diminishing? This current event is one of many others that are not receiving as much attention as they should. Through this, I believe that communication is the first step into influencing others for the better. I want to help. I need to help. Although I may still be unsure of my future profession, I know for sure that I want to be a positive influence in someone's life.
While the blue paint remains a stain on my flip flops, I look back on those three days that taught me to be grateful. It taught me to find the good in the bad. It taught me to share peace with those around me. After all, blue is also the color of serenity.
Reflection: I fixed a few typos and grammatical errors. My peer suggested I add more things in the fourth paragraph but I'm not sure if I'm happy with it.